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My mother always taught me not to be afraid. Said that we, witches, were more powerful beings than any other, and we should not fear our lower. This always seemed contradictory, after all many of us were burned alive by these lower centuries ago. And today we live on the margins of society, like frightened creatures. Where is our superiority?
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Excellent! I liked very much the nostalgia came across El Chavo del Ocho in the end, our dear keys, but you have Madruga athletic ... only if marathoner's Eve. I have not read the stories always in posting order - his was the last I read. I must say that his story was the golden key which closed this challenge for me. Congratulations on your technique and creativity, good luck in the challenge.
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By the time I saw the title, I've thought the witch 71. But interestingly, the tale of the beginning takes the reader on a very different place from the village diy rack case and makes the reader forget diy rack case this reference, like you're reading something totally again. I really enjoyed this spin-off keys.
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A "fanfic" the Chavo, telling the origin of Da. Clotilde yields a great work, but we must decide whether the way forward. Comedy? Drama? With a little bit of salt, I'm sure the author would get on the podium.
I liked the story so far I realized it is key. I think I should have been the counter in this regard, but I do not know, expecting a different order. However, this does not diminish the good balcony of the author for making this connection. Hehe
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Hahaha 'booooa! Man, in the middle of the text I was planning on telling how well written and is cute, with nothing to seduce ... and the life of the little witch continues and the huge text does not show emotions to talking the kid "spoiled and cheeky" diy rack case hahah ' . How much mastery in tailoring the event and justify so many things; the shifter, the elderly, the dishes she prepares for the neighbor. I think the story could have ended in the phrase "Perhaps children have a sixth sense for these things," without the need to transcribe part of an episode. However, anyway, I found very friendly and a brilliant idea. Congratulations and good luck !.
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